I’ve decided I’m going to change my writing style. For the longest time I’ve had a pretty silly tone, but I’m going to shift to a more serious tone and style now. To experiment with this, I’ve written a short story that I’d like to get some feedback on, but make sure you read the entire thing before you do.
Oh, and it’ll help if you do it within the next, say, twenty-four hours.
Duth Olec's Cuckoo Cosmos 