Character Recurrence in Novels

Something I’ve noticed when reading old Charles Dickens novels is that many stories of his have some character who appears early but is gone after a few chapters. They’re named but they’re not really important, and they disappear and are forgotten soon after.

And then 80% of the way through the story they return, out of nowhere, and it’s mentioned they knew this one character from the beginning of the story. Does this happen in stories anymore? I’m particularly thinking of Dickens stories that take place over a character’s whole life, which is actually probably most of them, but this is something I tend to notice a lot in Dickens books but not so much in more modern tales.

It’s an interesting part of stories. I’m holding things like this in reserve for the Cloudy Cuckoo Cosmos as a series, though that’s over multiple books where a character who appeared in one might appear unexpectedly in another, and that’s more notable for full-series readers than having a character return in a single book.

What started me thinking on characters returning within a single book was a chapter I was editing recently. My original draft had the main character meeting with some unnamed characters for a conversation just for a bit of world building, but there really wasn’t anything to it. As I’ve been working on a lot of story notes regarding characters related to where this meeting took place, I realized a couple characters who’d appeared earlier could easily appear instead, connecting the world and time in the story more. These don’t appear at the beginning–not until more than halfway through, in fact–but it’s still a bit of an “oh yeah, them!” moment.

The weird thing about Wandering Fortunes as you can see with what chapters I’ve put up is the second half is a different planet. With an entirely different setting, there’s not much call for characters from the first half coming back. My fourth book will be a little like that too, in fact. But in future books this happenstancing of old character return meetings is something I might experiment with. It’s probably easier both to do and make significant if it’s planned from the outset, and I do write outlines before I write stories, but in the case of Wandering Fortunes the meeting was both added in the editing phase and spur of the moment.

Odemon #347

“Anorth is said to be a type of Pokemon predecessor, with eight wings–”
ME: Wait, wings? Wings?? *picks up Anorith* Those things are supposed to be wings?
ANORITH: Um, yeah? What else would they be?
ME: I dunno. I always thought they were like… feelers, or something. Fins? They don’t look like wings!
ANORITH: They’re insect wings.
ME: … *looks at Yanma* yeah okay fine.

-Odemon #347 Anorith

Darmenzi is one year old today!

Well, in about a month it will b…

Wait, really? I released it one year ago today??? I thought that was next month! Well, fig!

So yeah, one year ago today I released the Darmenzi as an ebook on Smashwords. Maybe the February date was me thinking of the physical book’s release, which came a bit later on Lulu. This was all a little over a year after I’d put an in-progress version up for free online; you can still read that, too! It’s nowhere near as good as the final book, which is like, only a dollar on Smashwords anyway.

So, yeah, that’s a thing! You know, legally, this book is eligible for awards. Which awards? I don’t know I honestly have never paid attention to any awards for anything ever. Okay that’s a lie I paid attention to the Nintendo Power awards but there’s no way those weren’t rigged. In terms of books… not really. I should maybe fix that. It doesn’t help that I’m generally about 30 years behind on books. But I digress.

I’d wanted to have a special preview of something for this date, but that was when I thought it was in February! So, uh, an audiobook of Darmenzi is still planned to be made. So far we have only hit one major snag. And that’s… that… I haven’t… made… Dangeresque 3 yet. No but for real I apparently talked about doing some initial recording well over a year ago now and that’s just absolutely INSANE. So much gets in the way–my forgetful memory, which I’ve tried to alleviate with a gigantic two whole lines in my agenda of nothing but AUDIOBOOK over and over, but eventually even that just kind of… becomes part of the noise. Even when I do remember, well, both I and the guy I’m recording it with run into problems, schedule conflicts, technology issues, and general low spirits and sickness. Even if it’s a bit past the exciting time of release, this audiobook is going to be produced… even if it might not be until the second anniversary.

Odemon #723

Dartrix stared down Mudbray. “Haha, you can’t possibly expect to beat me,” Dartrix said. “A ground-type? Weak to Grass?”
“But I know your secret weakness,” Mudbray said. “You can’t fight with dirty feathers!”
Mudbray used Mud-Slap! It doesn’t effect Dartrix…
Dartrix laughed. “I am immune to dirt!” A Kabuto fell on them from the sky.

-Odemon #723 Dartrix

Odemon #513

TRAINER entered Reversal Mountain. “Okay, according to these Pokedex notes, Pansear lives in caves in volcanoes, so I should be able to find one here.”
ANYWAY LONG STORY SHORT THEY DIDN’T BECAUSE PANSEAR HAVE BEEN EXCLUSIVELY LOCATED IN FORESTS IN THE GAMES. I think the kids writing these Pokedex entries are trying to punk the professors who send them out to do their work for them.

-Odemon #513 Pansear

Character Creation: Random Element and Character Interaction

(what am i actually doing this okay here we go)

CHARACTER CREATION! For most, this is no mere hypothetical. The Latin Alphabet is composed of 27 characters… or is it 26? 14?? I don’t know. But this is irrelevant. I am referring to characters in a story. Most stories have them. Stories that don’t exist may even have them. Stories that don’t exist as well. These two sentences are saying different things. Where am I going with this? WELL. Even the shortest, saddest story has characters, even if some of them are dead. Do baby shoes count as characters? Well, that depends on what kind of story you’re writing. Has anyone ever written from the POV of the baby shoes?

Longer, more involved stories, novels particularly, have a lot more characters, some of them even named! These characters are usually dealt with for so long that some backstory is in order. Sometimes it’s as simple as where they were raised; other times it’s a dark and brooding history of death and loss and that’s why they have this scar and this edgy haircut and wear a mask.

But in my case, I don’t just don’t have involved stories, I have an involved figgin universe. Lord of the Rings had a lot of history and only a few books. Discworld had over 40 novels and quite a bit of backstory, but I’m not sure how much. I forget if Rincewind’s parents are ever mentioned. But many writers, especially of a series with multiple books, write more backstory than ever gets mentioned in books. Having all this solidified lets the writing be more consistent; you won’t have a character mention their childhood on the farm and then in a later book we meet their high-profile business consultant parents. No, you decide early on their parents are owners of a taco stand, and you stick to that. Well, unless you come up with something better later, but then you have to make sure it doesn’t contradict what you have written into books, unless you just don’t care, because honestly, are we sure most readers are gonna care?

Anyhoo, how does character creation work? Well, you start out with a setting and generally have an idea of what kind of character you need. Meek accountant? Beefy accountant? Clownish accountant? Someone who’s not an accountant?? Maybe a small business owner who shows kindness to the protagonist, or a small business owner whose churlish attitude just shows them further how dismal the city they’ve arrived at is. A military general to fight in a war, or a cool kid friend to balance the nerdy friend. There’s lots of characters to choose from, and the general idea isn’t that hard to start from. Then you do a whole bunch of stuff like names and design that I don’t want to talk about today. I am going to touch on it, though. Because:

RANDOM DECISIONS: So the thing is that in real life a lot of peoples’ information is arbitrary. Not always–names might change based on who their parents are, date of birth might make when events in their life happen different, gender probably changes stuff. But for the most part a character can have any number of these things and still basically be the same. How do you decide? Um I just pull up a random number generator and let it decide for me. Names I’ll usually look at a list of names and choose one at random but like, date of birth? Random number. Gender? Random number (and yes, that’s on a spectrum–depending on the number, this character may be trans!) Do you need glasses? WELL YOU DON’T GET TO CHOOSE IN LIFE IF YOU NEED GLASSES, SO I WON’T CHOOSE FOR THESE CHARACTERS. Maybe. I have different species and some have naturally better eyesight. Maybe better eyecare is available for the affluent? You know, I use random number generation but still pull things in various directions.

And then there’s character interactions. Characters interact with other characters, usually, and having a backstory means they meet other characters. Once again I use a random number generator to go through my list of existing characters and find out–have they met in the past? If so, when? From this I get a clearer idea of a character’s history. (And in one case got a potential short story idea for the future!) Once I know who they’ve met I determine who they’ve met long enough to get an opinion or history with, and then–you guessed it–RANDOM NUMBER GENERATION. I get a random number, and the better the number, the better their relationship.

So for example, a group of senior generals for a kingdom’s military. Get a variety of personalities, some good, some bad. Maybe use RNG for this, maybe not. One of the generals is a nice guy, very jovial, everyone loves them and they’re one of the most personable generals. They have a family, they’re well-known and respected, and then as you’re grabbing random numbers to determine their relationship to characters they’ve met their spouse rolls a ONE. This loved character has the worst possible relationship with their spouse.

And so that’s how a well-respected, noble, adored general is secretly beating their spouse.

Not all is well in random number generation land. Sometimes it makes characters and settings harder–harder to figure out, harder to write. But realistically? I think adding the random element makes it more real. And it adds another dimension to a character and their history that wasn’t there before.

I mentioned characters meeting other characters in their past, and I’m actually going to talk about that more next week. After all, once you’ve put all this work into a character, why only use them once?

Odemon #121

CHARACTER 1: I FOUND AN ALIEN! *holds up a Starmie*
CHARACTER 2: What? That’s not an alien. I have a real alien right here. *points to Deoxys* There’s very few on Earth and it can change into different formes.
CHARACTER 1: Big deal that describes most Legendary Pokemon now. But Starmie, THIS thing is geometric!
ROGGENROLA: rola
CHARACTER 1: shut up you don’t count you’re a rock

-Odemon #121 Starmie

Odemon #86

Navy SEEL
Sea, um… Eel… well that’d be about it I guess.
“Seel isn’t a sea eel, though.”
It… it could be…

-Odemon #86 Seel

Odemon #354

An evil laugh echoed through the mechanical base. “I really must get rid of that echo.” The evil laugh continued. “Nobody in the world would have such evil genius as to create this diabolical plan! Nobody but the the great Dr. Eggman!”
Orbot and Cubot watched Eggman monologue. “Back in another Odemon, I see,” Orbot said.
“I thought we already took over the world with that dog,” Cubot said.
“Now!” Eggman said. “Start the machine!” He watched the machine as it powered on. “For years I’ve used small animals to power my robots; now I will use the power of cursed spirits!” He looked at the floppy doll inside the machine, and the doll glared back. Despite its smile, the Banette looked like it wanted to rip Eggman’s mustache off.
“Let’s get that energy out of there,” Eggman said. “Unzip that mouth!”
A claw lowered into the pod and grabbed at the Banette. The ghostly Pokemon floated away, but other claws held it down and unzipped its mouth. Ghouls of wailing energy flowed from the doll, shattering the claws, but the machine sucked the energy up and transferred it to another pod.
“Yes! Yes! I’ll finally destroy Sonic and his friends this time,” Eggman said. The second pod opened, and a doll fell to the floor.
“Ooh, creepy,” Cubot said.
The doll rose and floated in the air.
Tails Doll.

-Odemon #354 Banette

Odemon #253

Twirling leaf
Off the tree
Through the breeze
Chops the branch
Leaf Blade

-Odemon #253 Grovyle